Back on the magical block, y'all!!!
Between otha people newz, and some otha thangs, I was able to finsh the first chapter to Fable Avenue Book III this weekend.
I've had the idea on how this opening chapter would flow, and one creative strike, allowing it all be from one character's p.o.v. helped keep a consistency among its movement. There's a quirkiness to the first chapter...not quite as quirky as following the airflow of subway trains out of the station and up the street to Fable Avenue (as in Book II, Brooklyn's Lilac Brew), but there's a slick way I was able to reintroduce all the characters, where they are, and a hint at the consequences of the last installment, and see how they've been getting a long.
And there's also some new characters to say 'Hi' too.
There's no dialogue. There's a fun action sequence. A good deal of mystery and intrigue. And a lot of sentimentality. While Brooklyn's Lilac Brew was an introduction to Fable Avenue's culture, Book III treats the reader as an initiated member. But it does not scoff at the newcomer.
(Hey, even I've started on the second or third...sometimes the fourth book of a series).
There's some exposition at play, which usually scares the hell out of writers. Treated as vampires, the word 'exposition' is a enough to make any writer grab a sacred, religious trinket, a stake, and some garlic...or whatever the ritual is for warding off techniques labeled as 'bad writing'. But I believe there's a correct way to write anything.
To make sure I put myself on the correct path of penning this opening chapter, I consulted some other works. Not all of them were literature. I consulted part of Mario Puzo's The Godfather. A part of the book that wasn't translated into film. I also took a look at a sequence in an episode of The Sopranos. Now, while both pieces have Mafia themes, going back and reading and observing the structure of a scene (or scenes) had nothing to do with gangsters.
I also took a look at the opening to the film adaption of Watchmen. Beautiful. Watched it over and over. The whole opening credit sequence putting on display the passage of time, the movement through eras gone by, and the influence made to create an alternate timeline, is amazing. A plus is it being appropriately serenaded with Bob Dylan's "The Times They Are a-Changin'". But I also liked the fight between Comedian and 'his attacker'. I know people cursed the movie for not being frame-for-frame of the comic, and retouching some points, but it was awesome to me.
Sorry, Alan Moore.
Though it was a spur-of-the-moment decision to have music playing in a fight sequence in Brooklyn's Lilac Brew, I'm sure my mind was recalling that scene deep, deep, deep, deep, deep, deep down. And this opening sequence for Book III is the same. Imagine the blues.
I like what I have. I'll look back at it later and see that it actually sucks, but for now (and before my editor sees it), I'll remain happy.
More info will be coming soon. What's next in the writing will take me back to High School to two manuscripts I wrote in the 9th and 10th grades. They're getting cut up and sprinkled into The Fable Avenue Saga. And keeping with the musical theme, one of the manuscripts was not only inspired by a song, but a whole album.
Thanks, Prince.
On the one, y'all. Confusion! Las Vegas!
b write black...
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Monday, September 21, 2015
Monday, August 31, 2015
Spirits and Conjure, incants and hexes
Here I stand,
returning to Fable Avenue. Writing has begun on the third installment, and I
can feel the growing intensity of the story. As cliché as it sounds, it’s like that
moment when the elements gather for a storm. The tense humidity, the increasing
winds, all feeling like Mother Nature balling her fist and getting ready to
remind humanity of her strength.
The story’s
weight has become heavier.
Yeah, I know…
The Fable Avenue
Saga has always had a certain gravitas to it, even with all its whimsical text.
The story is still, at its core, a reflection of what black people have been
through (the Maafa). It’s our
burdens wrapped up in a fairytale. It sounds disrespectful, but it’s far from
it. It’s as respectful and honest as our story can ever get. A road map
presented as mythology, where we’ve gone, where we’re going, and where we stand
spiritually in the eyes of the Cosmos.
It’s all been an
introduction from here. The Ghost of Gabriel’s Horn was an introduction to the
mythos, the hidden mysticism of the world. It set the ground rules for the
invisible universe ready to be tapped into by the main characters, those gods
and goddesses tricked into believing they were mortal men and women. Though not
always ‘proper’ in its usage, the vocabulary was presented. “Tricks,” and “hexes”.
It was simple, before turning into “incants” and “conjures”. Nothing that
hadn’t been used before in other stories, but a fresh twist on how they were
used.
Brooklyn’s Lilac
Brew, the second installment, took place 57 years after The Ghost of Gabriel’s
Horn, and it continued with the theme of introductions. Fable Avenue was an
established culture. I wanted to write it as if there was still a good deal of
history to it, and starting the book with that gut punch of a first chapter
dropped people in the middle of some drama. The shockwave of that chapter would
resonate all the way through the book’s climax.
And here I am. Book
III has begun. Introductions aside.
We know the
characters. We know the place. We know the rules of the world. It’s time to
play chess.
Yes, there will
be new characters to come into the fold of this grand mythology. Other
characters, only mentioned or cameoed in Brooklyn’s Lilac Brew (and The Ghost
of Gabriel’s Horn) will be expounded on.
The elements have
gathered. The tension has compressed. Mother Nature has balled her fist.
And The Fable Avenue Saga’s third installment will
reveal itself as a force of nature!
Monday, June 8, 2015
BROOKLYN'S LILAC BREW IS AVAILABLE NOW
Thank you for your patience.
And now, TWIN GRIFFIN BOOKS presents its feature, literary presentation:
FABLE AVENUE BOOK II: BROOKLYN'S LILAC BREW!!!!
And now, TWIN GRIFFIN BOOKS presents its feature, literary presentation:
FABLE AVENUE BOOK II: BROOKLYN'S LILAC BREW!!!!
AVAILABLE FOR ORDER NOW
@ AMAZON.COM and BARNES AND NOBLE(.COM).
Tuesday, June 2, 2015
Brewed in Brooklyn
"I would've waited an eternity for this..." - Megatron
Fable Avenue's second installment's proof has been APPROVED!!!!
We are now simply waiting for all outlets to update their catalogs to include BROOKLYN'S LILAC BREW.
As stated earlier, coming this month from TWIN GRIFFIN BOOKS...
B. WRITE. BLACK!!!!!!!!
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